This small piece is very particular.
I don't like your begining.Can you make it more interessing? I hear "the Pilchard style". Havin' a question - Are you learning by him?
My mark is 7.
Опубликовал: Dima 20.06.2006 @ 12:57
Waitin'....
I'm listen
Опубликовал: Ronnie McMillan 20.06.2006 @ 11:26
thank u, Паштет. let's just hope i've translated everything correctly... u don't like the beginnin'? so do i man thanks once again
Who's next?
Не плохое Demo. Надо бы развить. А за начало я бы 10\2 балла поставил , но рейтинг портить не хочу.
Опубликовал: Ronnie McMillan 19.06.2006 @ 21:42
thanx 2 nick moksus & daniel jourth!
daniel, u'r right. soon i'll show here smth longer and more musical.
nick, tx 4 the comment. yep, i'm from ireland, longford. com' and c me if u like. i could try 2 answer y'all in russian but i'm not sure 'bout my knowledge. Who's next?
Hi, Ronnie! Well done My mark is 10 , because the tune sounds pretty well without any remarkable global mistakes. The only thing I dislike is the last part. The composotion loses its dynamic (in my humble opinion ) The rest is very good for a song without any "extrafruital" effects.
Are you really from Ireland? Cool! 10/10
things and songs... Your Hello is too small... We can't say something serious. 
Well done 
Cool!